The Mistake-Chapter 2
Thanks for all the great comments. I have to say this chapter is equally intense but is very short. Chapter Two - Connie's Plan Connie relaxed as best she could and tried to play along. "Not so hard...
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Like you said this is intense. Please, please Gene or someone get there QUICK.
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I sure hope someone heard her screams along with the gun shots! Let us know soon! Lisa
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For a minute there, I was hoping Connie would come out of the situation unharmed. Its a shame the brother had to be there...Poor Connie! Hopefully help arrives soon. Hurry back with more soon Curly!
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One down and one to go...but poor Connie did not escape. And now unconscious she is defenseless. Let's hope someone heard her scream before she faded into darkness.
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Someone must have heard her!!!! At the very least she got one! HA!
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Yup... it doesn't pay to mess with the Barkley women! You might end up full of lead. Very intense and well written. Hurry back, Curly! HUGS! Patti
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I hope that someone heard the gunshots and will come to help Connie. Hurry back Curly Laura !!! Laura
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